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【AIP学粹集】英语写作:Natural Environment over Economic Development

2016.03.09 1143人阅读

自然环境高于经济发展

Natural Environment over Economic Development


By:广美附中AIP高二 B班黄芷茵


It is not a secret that there is a boom in the economic development, which results in the aggregation of environment pollution. Undoubtedly, people need economic development. Natural environment is, however, getting worse with the prosperity of economy. Nevertheless, one should beware that natural environment is significantly far more crucial than economic development.


经济迅速的发展已不再是秘密,但却导致了环境的加剧污染。毋需质疑,人们需要经济的发展。虽然如此,随着经济的繁荣,自然环境变得越来越差。然而,人们应该意识到自然环境远比经济发展重要。



Initially,it is for the fact that humans are more closely linked to the environment than to the economy. Environment is the foundation of all living beings on earth. We breathe the air and drink the water; we obtain food from it; and we inhabit here. What the environment provides for us is necessary greatly, and furthermore, no one could be alive once leaving it. On one hand, it is true that human beings need the environment tremendously, however, on the other hand, they are virtually undermining it to realize the rapid development of economy. But it should be in conscious of that the economy can never bring us the necessities like air and water. Therefore, it is never too excessive to overestimate the importance of environment.


首先,人们和自然环境的联系比和经济的联系更紧密。环境是地球上所有生物的基础。我们呼吸空气,饮用水;我们从环境中取得食物;并且我们居住在这里。环境提供给我们的都是必须的,并且,一旦离开了它,没有一个人能够存活。一方面,人们及其需要环境,然而,在另一方面,他们实际上为了实现经济的急速发展却在破坏环境。但需要意识到的是,经济永远都没有办法给我们带来生活必需品,如空气和水。因此,我们如何强调自然环境的重要性都不为过。




In addition, since plenty of factories are built up for manufacturing, emitting waste gas and discharging sewage without any considerations, the environment is consequently ruined. The sky of the cities is no longer as blue as that of 20 years ago, and the water of the rivers and oceans are not as clean as it used to be. What is worse, various sorts of animals are now endangered for the reason that their habitats have been destroyed by the contaminations of water and the overdevelopment of lands, causing the water losses and the soil erosion and desertification.


另外,由于大量的工厂建立来用于制造业,并且它们毫不顾忌的排放废和污水,环境最终被破坏。天空不再像20年前的一样蔚蓝,河流和海洋里的水也不再像从前那样干净。更糟糕的是,由于水污染和土地的过度开垦导致了水土流失和土地沙漠化,各种各样的动物因为生存环境遭到破坏而濒临灭绝。




Nonetheless,that is not the end of the story. In turn, the environment repels human beingswith natural disasters from which people suffer tremendous injuries physically and mentally. They die from the disasters and some of their families have been teared into pieces irreversibly. The causes of natural disasters like most of the floods and droughts can be attributed to the worsening deterioration of the environment. In other words, people gain retribution for what they have doneand have been doing, and they can never get pay even from the booming economy.


然而这并不是故事的结局。相反的,环境用自然灾害予以回击,使得人们身心都遭到极大的伤害,他们死于自然灾害,还有一些人的家庭因此变得支离破碎。像大部分洪水和干旱一类的自然灾害地起因都归咎于环境的恶化。换而言之,人们因为他们的所作所为而得到了应有的报应,并且他们永远都无法从经济的蓬勃发展得到偿还。




According to above analysis, it is natural environment other than economic developmentthat we are pursuing. Thus, individual should recognize the essence of the natural environment and protect it from being thwarted.


基于上述的分析,我们应该追求的应该是自然环境而不是经济的发展。因此,每一个人都应该意识到环境的重要性并且保护它以免受破坏。



麻辣鲜师Miss Q有话说


这篇是以A over B为题目的作文,范文本来是cats over dogs,比较浅显易懂的素材写作,黄芷茵选择对比自然环境和经济发展,属于雅思作文的范围,整个文章的结构清晰,在三个论点里通过不断对比自然环境和经济发展两方面来证明自己的观点,本文的单词量在高二年级的作文里还算比较大,另外通过使用不同的句型来展示句式的多变,总的来说,这篇文章值得大家学习一二。


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