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【AIP学粹集】英语写作:DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?(一)

2016.03.09 870人阅读

广美附中AIP201512月份的学生雅思写作课程,为了检验高二年级学生本学期的写作学习状况,采取用实际话题的形式来扩大题目,让同学们在谈论他们的业余爱好之余,探讨读书、看电视和玩游戏之间的优缺点,并发表他们的感悟。AIP语言中心的老师挑选了其中两篇较为优秀的文章分享给大家。


写作题目:



READING STORY BOOK IS BETTER FOR CHILDREN THAN WATCHING TELEVISION OR PLAYING COMPUTER GAMES. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?


AIP 2014B 李敏瑶

Thanks to the fact that the economy develops steadily, an increasing number of electronic products appear now. Views towards the phenomenon vary from person and person. Someone argue that reading story books is certainly beneficial to children‘s learning process, while others maintain that television shows and the computer games do serve as alternative sources of education. For my perspective, I tend to agree with the former point of view.

First of all, the story book is informative and full of wisdom. Reading is a kind of ways fundamental to children’s intellectual and emotional development. The famous literary works are the fruits of painstaking labor of the masters. They enable kids to know more essential knowledge and the profound truth. At the same time, reading books is capable of enlarging youngster’s horizon. Children are naïve and innocent. The fairy tales and fables are able to assist them to develop the imaging ability. It is advantageous for excessing the creativity. In addition, the content of the story books are usually positive, which assists the psychological development of kids. Besides, reading can improve children’s language skills and enhance their abilities to write. During the learning process, children will increase their vocabulary. They are more likely to encounter new words.



Equally important, reading story books will promote children to rethink, self-inspire and influence their behaviors. When youngsters feel lost, confused and afraid of the future, they are able to get the mental power from the books. The spirits and the qualities of the characters in the novels often encourage people to get the courage again and fight with the predicament. Furthermore, the story books can not only bring laughter, but also render thoughts, thus arousing sympathy of the readers.




However, it is true that watching television and playing computer games can be a modern and distinctive educators, as well as provide excellent ways for people to enjoy entertainment, but they still have some negative effects. At present, the shows with violence frequently appear in the television, even in the cartoon, which may 
adversely affect children, for they are immature and cannot tell right from wrong. Moreover, many teenagers indulge in those two activities. The television drama and the computer games are good at catching children’s eyes and tempt them to spend more time on the entertainment, causing it harder for them to concentrate in academic studies.

In conclusion, parents are responsible for encouraging children to do more reading instead of watching television or playing the computer games, for the latter entertainment may distract children while the former one can be a life-long hobby which assists to cultivate children’s literary and psychological development.



phenomenon n.现象,事件奇迹非凡的人

beneficial adj.有利的,有益的; []可享受利益的

maintain vt.保持保养坚持固执己见

for my perspective 我的观点

alternative adj.替代的备选的其他的另类的

informative adj.提供信息的增长见闻的

painstaking labor 艰苦的劳动

profound adj. 深厚的意义深远的严重的知识渊博的

enhance vt.提高,增加加强

mental adj.内心的,精神的,思想的,心理的智慧的,智[]力的〈口〉精神病的,意志薄弱的,愚笨的

predicament n.困境,窘况; []范畴

render v.使成为递交给予表达

sympathy n.意气相投,同感同情,同情心慰问和谐的一致

adversely affect 不利影响

immature adj.不成熟的未完成的粗糙的幼小

distract vt. 使分心使混乱




Miss Q有话说

敏瑶童鞋是个态度超级认真的娃儿,在写作课上笔记认真,同时也是最会举一反三的,几乎课上讲过的知识点、新词和句型,她都会在每次的作文中体现出来。这种学以致用的精神值得每位想要写好作文的同学学习、模仿。


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